Monday, April 6, 2026

Microfiction challenge #9: Steampunk (maybe*), balloon, looking at a watch

Libby and Beatrice dodged rocks and tree roots, giggling as their pantaloons ballooned around their legs. They slowed as they approached the expanse of Pteridium aquilinum, a hoary quietude devoid of birdsong and beech-leaf rustle.

The hush shattered. Music, maybe, but unlike any from a piano or dulcimer. The ferns backbended as the girls crept towards the source. Libby crouched and picked up a flat object. Letters glowing like fireflies spelled out “Missed call.” And beneath, “August 17, 2:27.” Libby checked the pocket watch attached to her bodice and turned the face towards Beatrice.

2:27.

The object went dark.

*Despite my best investigative efforts, I am still not entirely sure what steampunk is.

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  2. Well done for being a steampunk newbie! I went through a steampunk season when I discovered Pullman's Golden Compass books. That led me to a slew of YA books featuring alternative Victorian ages. I then realized that silly things from my youth, like the TV show "Wild, Wild West," was steampunk.

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  3. Oooh, I liked that!

    I took a cheat's interpretation of steampunk. You were more ambitious.

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